brilliant, breathtaking and unbelievable as always, and i feel so fortunate to have read this......Iove how your characters are always in this dissociating state while simultaneously living in the past, and the way you transition between those two aspects; also the similes in this one was beyond great and etching, the imageries and writing style immerses me so much I forget I'm reading and not living through a screen, nothing ever feels too long or too short, but perfectly intentional and well crafted, I often have a lot to say about the way you write and present the world through your peices, specially the observations and their descriptions, they always leaves me bewildered in a really good way, but I fail to articulate, anyway this was great and quite surprisingly still felt short, always an experience reading your work, glad you wrote this.
thank you Sakshi. as always, im stoked by your appreciation and glad you took the time to write down your thoughts here, that was so much to process and very much reassuring. such words of affirmation is hard to come by, and i do reiterate that i am taking notes frm these feedbacks. thank you again.
thank you. that is some compliment. i do think however im like nowhere near him, or any writer. but I thank you again. i write these since i have nothing going on in my life xD and its nice to know people take the time and effort to read through, appreciate it.
Didn't like it because didn't like it :( sentences too many and too many of them are so flat and not because I am a retarded reader!!!! >.< But BECAUSE it's mostly 'Padma do that, Padma did that' it reminded me of a child book because its readers usually cant follow the subject🧍♀️ you should be able to write more descriptive sentences and sentences with less words but more meanings. It didn't pull me in, respectfully
i like how ur so unhinged with me sez. and ima take this criticism seriously. and yeah ima try refining on this piece, i believe there's something here. trying to make this more than a substack post. much love.
reading ur writing makes me want to write pieces of stories bcs i cannot muster up a whole storyline 4 the life of me. ur manner of writing is always the most visceral. if u were wrote an entire novel i would love to read it‼️
brilliant, breathtaking and unbelievable as always, and i feel so fortunate to have read this......Iove how your characters are always in this dissociating state while simultaneously living in the past, and the way you transition between those two aspects; also the similes in this one was beyond great and etching, the imageries and writing style immerses me so much I forget I'm reading and not living through a screen, nothing ever feels too long or too short, but perfectly intentional and well crafted, I often have a lot to say about the way you write and present the world through your peices, specially the observations and their descriptions, they always leaves me bewildered in a really good way, but I fail to articulate, anyway this was great and quite surprisingly still felt short, always an experience reading your work, glad you wrote this.
thank you Sakshi. as always, im stoked by your appreciation and glad you took the time to write down your thoughts here, that was so much to process and very much reassuring. such words of affirmation is hard to come by, and i do reiterate that i am taking notes frm these feedbacks. thank you again.
You remind me of Ruskin Bond
thank you. that is some compliment. i do think however im like nowhere near him, or any writer. but I thank you again. i write these since i have nothing going on in my life xD and its nice to know people take the time and effort to read through, appreciate it.
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Didn't like it because didn't like it :( sentences too many and too many of them are so flat and not because I am a retarded reader!!!! >.< But BECAUSE it's mostly 'Padma do that, Padma did that' it reminded me of a child book because its readers usually cant follow the subject🧍♀️ you should be able to write more descriptive sentences and sentences with less words but more meanings. It didn't pull me in, respectfully
i like how ur so unhinged with me sez. and ima take this criticism seriously. and yeah ima try refining on this piece, i believe there's something here. trying to make this more than a substack post. much love.
reading ur writing makes me want to write pieces of stories bcs i cannot muster up a whole storyline 4 the life of me. ur manner of writing is always the most visceral. if u were wrote an entire novel i would love to read it‼️
eyy thank you. kind words again. if I ever write a novel, yes i would definitely send you a copy.